Friday, May 17, 2013

Daily Card Redesign #136: Viridian Scout

Daily Card Redesign is a daily Magic: The Gathering design exercise where I randomly choose a card for the scenario of it being killed late during its own set's development. I design a replacement card that uses the same art, is the same color, is the same rarity, and has a name that, alphabetically, keeps it within the same collector number for the set.


Redesign:


The first thing I wanted this to be was a creature with flash and an enters-the-battlefield plummet effect. But that is uncommon territory. Scrap that. The main focus of this card is that this guy is catching a creature by surprise. So, I wanted to keep flash.

Next, I wanted to make a flash creature with stats that have never existed before. There's been a 2/2 for 1G with flash in the form of Ashcoat Bear. So we either gotta go bigger or smaller in terms of power and toughness. We can't go bigger because the art depicts one mere elf. So, the obvious thing was to go smaller.

After that, I remembered the 1/1 Kithkin with flash that can be cast for either a white or blue mana. Taking that into consideration, green can also have a 1/1 for one colored mana. But that already exists with this Kithkin! AND the flashing Kithkin is already more flexible with that hybrid mana for a cost. 

How do we differentiate this redesigned card from that Kithkin? Two things: green's good at creatures. Anything white and blue can do, green can do better. AND you have a not-as-flexible non-hybrid colored mana in the cost of the redesigned card. With those two factors, I deemed it O.K. for green to have a 1/2 for G that also flashes onto the battlefield. Never existed before! Ta-da.

Thursday, May 16, 2013

Daily Card Redesign #135: Wave Elemental

Daily Card Redesign is a daily Magic: The Gathering design exercise where I randomly choose a card for the scenario of it being killed late during its own set's development. I design a replacement card that uses the same art, is the same color, is the same rarity, and has a name that, alphabetically, keeps it within the same collector number for the set.


Redesign:


I love the flavor of a Wave Elemental, but I didn't like how the original had its effect happen only once which also can't happen during the first turn it is in play. It's a living embodiment of waves! How could it not be doing wave-y things the whole time it's alive?

I decided that waves should be associated with attacking, since standing still would be like calm waters. But to make sure it still did its thing the first turn it was in play, I had the trigger for its "wave" ability to trigger off of entering the battlefield OR attacking. Besides, the Wave Elemental could have crashed into play. Go, go crashing of waves.

I wanted the player to FEEL like they were sending a wave toward another creature by requiring the tap of an untapped Island. Usually, this will be the basic land Island being tapped, which is the desired experience.

Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Daily Card Redesign #134: Mortician Beetle

Daily Card Redesign is a daily Magic: The Gathering design exercise where I randomly choose a card for the scenario of it being killed late during its own set's development. I design a replacement card that uses the same art, is the same color, is the same rarity, and has a name that, alphabetically, keeps it within the same collector number for the set.


Redesign:


There's a bunch of creatures in Rise of Eldrazi that level up. Here's a creature that can sap level counters from creatures to get stronger. As a bonus, it stands on its own outside of the set and can leech off of (typically) other +1/+1 counters. But it can also take away those -1/-1 counters on creatures of yours. Quite the interactive little bugger.

Daily Card Redesign #133: Tukatongue Thallid

Daily Card Redesign is a daily Magic: The Gathering design exercise where I randomly choose a card for the scenario of it being killed late during its own set's development. I design a replacement card that uses the same art, is the same color, is the same rarity, and has a name that, alphabetically, keeps it within the same collector number for the set.


Redesign:


Three +1/+1 counters is a throwback to old Thallids and their spore counters. This card fulfills either role that you're trying to achieve: either you used up your tokens and just want a large dude, or you're working on building up your tokens and could use some help for devour.

Monday, May 13, 2013

Daily Card Redesign #132: Anathemancer

Daily Card Redesign is a daily Magic: The Gathering design exercise where I randomly choose a card for the scenario of it being killed late during its own set's development. I design a replacement card that uses the same art, is the same color, is the same rarity, and has a name that, alphabetically, keeps it within the same collector number for the set.


Redesign:


I thought it'd be fun to do another -mancer for its new name. It also had to come alphabetically before Bituminous Blast. Anthropomancy is divination using human entrails. Gruesome. Very black. Which is why it triggers off of creatures dying. The red part, for the divination, is the looting mechanic. You have to discard first then draw a card because that's the order in which red loots while blue would be to draw a card first then discard a card. Now it's a black-red card!

I discovered that this card was the only unearth card at uncommon. So, I made sure to give it unearth. But then I needed it to have a relevant effect for when you unearth it for a turn. That's why I had it trigger off of not just creatures dying but from creatures being unearthed (with the poetic wording of "graveyard" to "in play" or "in play" to "graveyard"). I figured that the dead creatures coming back for a single turn from unearth could still be quite "entrail-y."

Hopefully this guy isn't too broken by not requiring a mana cost or a tap symbol.

Sunday, May 12, 2013

Goblin Artisans Weekend Art Challenge: Joshk92

Illustration by Joshk92 on deviantART
This weekend's Weekend Art Challenge on Goblin Artisans uses the above illustration. The challenge asks you to imagine Ravnica never existed and to find the mechanical heart of a new city-plane.

Here's my submission:


There were two things that come to mind that is the essence of a city: population and buildings. When I think of a city, I think of how there's a lot more people in it than non-city places. Additionally, all those buildings are present to accommodate the denizens of a city. Apartment buildings versus houses. Commercial buildings that house several businesses versus small stores/shops.

So, I had to accommodate both of these into a single card. Thankfully, before realizing this, I had thought of the fact that larger cities tend to have tourist attractions. In fact, the larger the city, the more presence tourism has. And the reason why I thought of "tourist attraction" was because of how there's a peculiar spotlight on two folks within the art. These folks could actually be tour guides or part of a tour's presentation.

For Buildings, I came to the conclusion that it should be a land type. I don't need to define further what Buildings would do for this card, since this is just a glimpse card I'm designing. However, as this card shows, one implementation is for them to just function like Gates, where other cards would reference Buildings. Of course, they would have more mechanical relevance than Gates as they are one of the two core attributes of a city.

And what kind of people live in a city? Citizens! If there's going to be a high number of people defining this city-plane, it should be Citizens. I was tempted to use Humans, but this city is going to be full of non-humans that live there, too. So, it wouldn't make sense to have Goblins and Elves be not considered part of the city. I also decided that every color should be able to have access to producing Citizens, so I made them colorless, flying in the fact of past cards that produced white Citizen creature tokens.

My first iteration of designing a Tourist Attraction card was to copy Khalni Garden, except the land would produce colorless mana. And, in exchange for that drawback, it would generate a 1/1 instead of a 0/1 Plant. I believed this was fine because I compared this to having a Memnite and a basic land in play on the first turn. With the Memnite 1/1 and untapped basic land, you have the drawback of two cards down and an artifact type for susceptibility to artifact destruction spells. With this card, you lose that one mana for the turn. In exchange, you have a 1/1 that's not an artifact.

But then it didn't feel like a Tourist Attraction if there was just one 1/1. And that's when I remembered how the larger the city, the more tourists are drawn to it. So, I keyed into having you tap your Buildings. The more Buildings you have (the larger "your city" is), the more "tourists" you can draw in.

When it comes to a set where there's a focus on a large number of creature tokens like the Eldrazi Spawn in Rise of the Eldrazi, it's important that, if they're 0/1, that they are functionally different, gameplay-wise, from Eldrazi Spawn. We don't want to rehash the same gameplay from before, even if it uses different rules text achieving basically the same thing.

One thing I thought of for 0/1 Citizens is something like, "T: Govern." Whatever "govern" does, I don't know. Replace it with a better word, and it would contribute to some kind of mechanical relevance in the set. However, the problem is that there needs to be reminder text for new keywords at lower rarities. And if colorless Citizens are going to permeate the set, we can't have that much text devoted to a new keyword and its reminder text. So, the Citizens have to do something else that requires few characters in the text, like "T: Gain 1 life."

In the end, I couldn't think of any inherent ability that a Citizen should have, so I decided that the fact that Citizen is an important type was going to be in this theoretical city set. There would be a mechanic in the set that would leverage Citizens. And if Citizens would have no abilities, we can't leave them as 0/1s, otherwise, they'll just be worse than Eldrazi Spawn. 1/1 it is, then! Don't worry - sets are flexible in the kind of card designs they include, which can accommodate for an environment that has a bunch of these tokens running around. Just look at Rise of the Eldrazi.

Daily Card Redesign #131: Cobra Trap

Daily Card Redesign is a daily Magic: The Gathering design exercise where I randomly choose a card for the scenario of it being killed late during its own set's development. I design a replacement card that uses the same art, is the same color, is the same rarity, and has a name that, alphabetically, keeps it within the same collector number for the set.


Redesign:


It's a flexible fog effect! And the condition to cast it cheaper is keyed off of the art depicting just one guy there. You can get more Snakes this way, but they are forced to block right away, as a drawback. For balance.